You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. Tamil sex film You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Most of the time you guessed wrong. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your
