Sorryanonymous readerReport 2011-09-07 22:08:54Grammar lessons. . Tamil sex . …anonymous readerReport 2010-09-17 09:50:26Terrible, Awful, just not gd enufCherrypoppin101Report 2009-02-08 21:10:07dude…learn to breeak up the dialoge and use quotation marks…”you know” those things. …over all good story, but proof it…Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-11 03:27:21It had a good plot and dialogue, you just need to proof read your story, check the grammer, the spelling, punctuation and you need to watch out for switch from first to 3rd person.«12» 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-24 22:11:46Grammar lessons and the speaking was terrible I had no idea what was going on you need to proof read it. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-24 22:11:46Grammar lessons and the speaking was terrible I had no idea what was going on you need to proof read it.
