To Thel20, you should proofread your comments, your writing and grammar was every bit as bad as the authors. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 06:16:48To the person who commented on my previous comment. Tamil sex My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. You probably don’t submit stories but if you’re gonna knock someone for spelling and grammar at least have your own shit in order!!! You really have to work on your writing. First of the story felt rushed. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-10 10:58:11I’m not going to say it was bad but i will say that you really need to start proof reading.
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