I didn’t care about the paragraph breaks. Don’t give up, you may want to rewrite this story and see if the comments improve.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-07 08:34:59F-ING amazing. Tamil sex film Writting must have comas, quotations, and paragraohs. Don’t give up, you may want to rewrite this story and see if the comments improve.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-07 08:34:59F-ING amazing. 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 23:43:04paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 16:56:41paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2011-09-21 15:39:06Your story was good and the sex was hot, but it was hardd to read. Your writting is like someone talking without changing tones or expressions. I read it through all the way.
