4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. Tamil sex film … It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. go homeREADERReport 2004-06-19 13:11:35As jack has written about a lot of your work, you really need to polish it off. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. … Use more euphonisms or none at all. post corrections. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack.
